Comments for Adaymo's Weblog http://adaymo.wordpress.com Poetry and Random Thoughts Thu, 15 Oct 2009 13:44:28 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Cosme by Abnegation http://adaymo.wordpress.com/2009/10/14/cosme/#comment-90 Abnegation Thu, 15 Oct 2009 13:44:28 +0000 http://adaymo.wordpress.com/?p=248#comment-90 consider me jealous. this is fantastic! eye can't recall you ever being this deliberately iambic.... great sense of longing, a greater sense of the taboo! "would never approve.../ ...I dare not try/ ...don’t even believe/ that I might deserve you" ..... eye think I need 2 get out more because that's hot. ja? ha! "all lovers worth having/ are out of reach" -truth if eyeve ever known it "like ivy on my heart/ you sprawl/ so unaware of me" that hurts. quietly. somberly? that's sick. LOVE it consider me jealous. this is fantastic! eye can’t recall you ever being this deliberately iambic….

great sense of longing, a greater sense of the taboo!
“would never approve…/ …I dare not try/ …don’t even believe/ that I might deserve you”

….. eye think I need 2 get out more because that’s hot. ja? ha!

“all lovers worth having/ are out of reach”
-truth if eyeve ever known it

“like ivy on my heart/ you sprawl/ so unaware of me”

that hurts.
quietly. somberly?
that’s sick.
LOVE it

]]> Comment on About by Kitty http://adaymo.wordpress.com/about/#comment-88 Kitty Wed, 27 May 2009 23:03:41 +0000 #comment-88 thank you, it is actually picasso! one of his early sketches thank you, it is actually picasso! one of his early sketches

]]> Comment on About by ldartagnansfoil http://adaymo.wordpress.com/about/#comment-87 ldartagnansfoil Wed, 27 May 2009 22:28:24 +0000 #comment-87 What a beautiful picture at the top of your blog! Did you paint it yourself? For some reason it reminds me of some of D.H. Lawrence's work. What a beautiful picture at the top of your blog! Did you paint it yourself? For some reason it reminds me of some of D.H. Lawrence’s work.

]]> Comment on a funk by Abnegation http://adaymo.wordpress.com/2009/03/24/a-funk/#comment-85 Abnegation Tue, 24 Mar 2009 15:00:42 +0000 http://adaymo.wordpress.com/?p=210#comment-85 she returns! she returns!

]]> Comment on Frost by moment of clarity « Abnegation http://adaymo.wordpress.com/2008/02/19/frost/#comment-84 moment of clarity « Abnegation Mon, 09 Feb 2009 19:17:45 +0000 http://adaymo.wordpress.com/2008/02/19/frost/#comment-84 [...] taken from the piece Frost. thanks and credit to adaymo for unwittingly donating a few lines to its completion! [...] [...] taken from the piece Frost. thanks and credit to adaymo for unwittingly donating a few lines to its completion! [...]

]]> Comment on Possibility by abnegation http://adaymo.wordpress.com/2008/12/04/197/#comment-83 abnegation Thu, 04 Dec 2008 14:45:47 +0000 http://adaymo.wordpress.com/2008/12/04/197/#comment-83 you know theres no title, yes? "This place/ Where left is a band/ And right is a bar" ---- reads well! "You/ I/ We/ Merlot/ And/ Possibility" ---- love that! "I never kissed you/ But I should have." ---- can something qualify for innocent and salacious all @ the same time? :) over the shoulder regret? soft, though.... perhaps why no title..... either way, eye dig it! inspiring. stirs something in me! you know theres no title, yes?

“This place/ Where left is a band/ And right is a bar”
—- reads well!

“You/ I/ We/ Merlot/ And/ Possibility”
—- love that!

“I never kissed you/ But I should have.”
—- can something qualify for innocent and salacious all @ the same time? :)

over the shoulder regret? soft, though…. perhaps why no title….. either way, eye dig it! inspiring. stirs something in me!

]]> Comment on Milan by Abnegation http://adaymo.wordpress.com/2008/11/11/milan/#comment-82 Abnegation Wed, 12 Nov 2008 06:34:42 +0000 http://adaymo.wordpress.com/?p=195#comment-82 hmmmmm... eye like the way it reads, even if the intent is not completely clear 2 me.... yet. "i admired your curiousity/ and mused over/ your secrecy/ saw your delicate features/ as decisively more stunning/ than mine" ----------> sings.... particularly stimulating is: "never wanted to see/ the portrait/ you painted before me/ the happiness you felt/ in his company" ..:..:..:..:..:..:..:..:..:..:..:..:..:..:.. it has a lot of weight 2 it.... heavy. sweet. as if there were some universal truth behind it? hmmmmm… eye like the way it reads, even if the intent is not completely clear 2 me…. yet.

“i admired your curiousity/ and mused over/ your secrecy/ saw your delicate features/ as decisively more stunning/ than mine” ———-> sings….

particularly stimulating is: “never wanted to see/ the portrait/ you painted before me/ the happiness you felt/ in his company”
..:..:..:..:..:..:..:..:..:..:..:..:..:..:.. it has a lot of weight 2 it…. heavy. sweet. as if there were some universal truth behind it?

]]> Comment on Everything’s Bullshit. by Abnegation http://adaymo.wordpress.com/2008/10/29/i-wont-send-this-to-your-email-but-if-you-find-it-here-its-your-own-damn-problem/#comment-81 Abnegation Wed, 29 Oct 2008 20:31:27 +0000 http://adaymo.wordpress.com/?p=189#comment-81 HA! thats hilarious! HA! thats hilarious!

]]> Comment on Dirt on Her Shoes by Kitty http://adaymo.wordpress.com/2008/09/30/dirt-on-her-shoes/#comment-79 Kitty Tue, 30 Sep 2008 17:34:21 +0000 http://adaymo.wordpress.com/?p=173#comment-79 shit. shit shit shit i tried to edit it but i'm at a loss. what should i salvage what should i throw back? glad you like the pic.... seems my is gaining traffic, must be the poetry. shit.
shit shit shit
i tried to edit it
but i’m at a loss.

what should i salvage
what should i throw back?

glad you like the pic….
seems my is gaining traffic,

must be the poetry.

]]> Comment on Dirt on Her Shoes by abnegation http://adaymo.wordpress.com/2008/09/30/dirt-on-her-shoes/#comment-78 abnegation Tue, 30 Sep 2008 15:13:50 +0000 http://adaymo.wordpress.com/?p=173#comment-78 [delete] EDIT: wisedom = wisdom [delete] ----------------- first. ahem...thats quite a photograph.... **** "free/ ...fundamental/ as a friendship" - precious(?)/ as a friendship "and matter can not return/ to its previous state/ after such a change" - that is the kind truth you find @ the bottom of a pit! eye always love reflection. ...but eye dont know what happened (and eye sooo want 2!) :( were they friends that became lovers? one of them wanted 2 be lovers? respect and admiration grew in2 the affectation of desire? or was the friend trying 2 save someone who wouldnt save herself? how did she burn ---> her? was "her" right...or was "she" right? sigh. * ** *** *** *** *** that REALLY is quite a photograph! ha! [delete] EDIT: wisedom = wisdom [delete]
—————–
first. ahem…thats quite a photograph….

****
“free/ …fundamental/ as a friendship”
– precious(?)/ as a friendship

“and matter can not return/ to its previous state/ after such a change”
– that is the kind truth you find @ the bottom of a pit!

eye always love reflection. …but eye dont know what happened (and eye sooo want 2!) :(
were they friends that became lovers? one of them wanted 2 be lovers? respect and admiration grew in2 the affectation of desire? or was the friend trying 2 save someone who wouldnt save herself? how did she burn —> her? was “her” right…or was “she” right? sigh.
*
**
***
***
***
***
that REALLY is quite a photograph! ha!

]]>